The last time I was on fire (revised) (a poem)

I’ve already made several small revisions to my original post; rather than change it again, I thought I should start a new post for revisions. Last night, I brought this poem to a critique group for some feedback. This version doesn’t address everything that was mentioned, but it does provide a clearer transition, and fixes [...]

Ninety degrees (revised) (a poem)

Still not completely satisfied with this, but I think I have improved it somewhat… a corner a quarter a sideways glance perpendicular a hot summer afternoon a scorcher a day for shorts instead of pants the distance of the equator from each pole 8 short of a boy band 8.6 shy of normal 15 Kevin [...]