Dropped the plot for a few days, but I was watching Moonage Daydream last night, and this is what came out. So I’m off prompt, but back for Day 30:
Odd sections about weather
1
Where there is weather
(I don’t know where I got that idea from
but it feels familiar)
maybe we still have a connection
The sky above me
is part of the sky
above you
and vice versa
and the wind
travels far
and back
(The old clichés are often true)
2
As I listen to an orchestra
of chameleons making noise
for noise’s sake
and feel the colors
without knowing what they are
the image of a man long gone
reconstitutes on a screen
(The sound of the orchestra fades)
3
When the weather changes
everything else changes
Roll the windows down
Roll the windows up
(Sometimes there aren’t many choices)
4
I know there are numbers everywhere
but I still think in shapes
and feel in abstracts
looking for the analogue
that shows me who I am
and tells me where I’m supposed to be
(Who am I supposed to be?)
5
Who is the weather?
(Who is the weather?)
6
I’ve never been to Hong Kong—
and it’s not there anymore
except in the movies
(It’s not there anymore)
7
I feel the weather sometimes
regardless of what it is
Open the windows
Close the windows
(Open your eyes)
8
I know there are shapes everywhere
but I keep looking at the numbers
and feel the distortion in the fabric
There is no analogue
for something that hasn’t happened before
(I may not be who I appear to be)
9
I don’t think about the weather
where you are
but I remember what it was like
(The warm tatami smell…)
(29 April 2023—posted 30 April 2023)

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The whole poem has a lovely feel to it. I especially like sections 1 and 3 and the concreteness of the image you end with.
Thanks!