The May 30th prompt in The Daily Poet: Day-By-Day Prompts For Your Writing Practice, by Kelli Russell Agodon & Martha Silano, is to write a couple of ten-line poems—one about a place you loved, and the other about a place you didn’t—and then combine them into a single twenty-line poem. I wrote about Tokyo (specifically, Saturdays in Tokyo), and getaways to Ocean Shores…
I used to live for Saturdays
(I used to hate the ocean
train rides into town
but off to the shores we went
making the rounds of the shops I loved
a cheap chalet by the beach
I could spend hours
a romantic getaway
immersing myself in the music
Something always seemed to go wrong
A chance to clear my head
her mood would turn without warning
leave my worries behind
and I’d have to apologize again
from station to station to station
I don’t miss the ocean
until I got home again
that much hasn’t changed
Suddenly, it all changed
Some things never change)
(30 May 2014)
