My fourth poem for National Poetry Writing Month combines the prompt from Napowrimo.net, which is to write a poem ‘with a word or idea or line it isn’t expressing directly’, with the prompt from the NaPoWriMo Facebook page, which is to ‘make use of Color [sic] as your theme.’ [Update: I moved the I have no need… stanza because it was bugging me. I will keep it where I moved it for now—but I suspect further revision will be necessary later on.]
Missing chroma
I am surrounded by it—
but it’s never the right kind
I have no need for jealousy
my gills are perfectly fine
and I don’t keep anything in the refrigerator that long
Sure, it keeps me in oxygen and whatnot
(and I do like breathing)
but I need the stuff that will
keep me in wine and grocery
gas for the car
treats for the cat
heat for the winter
four walls and a place to sleep
The breeze that travels along the creek
makes soothing sounds
and creates a pretty picture—
but, while it may be nice to look at
the truth, as the song says
ain’t that pretty at all
(4 April 2017)


gah! what is it? blue? green? is it a color at all? i did enjoy the whatnot, and needing to breathe
Yes, green. 🙂
ahhh. the second green i’ve read today. i do like it. it speaks to us all differently